It's the end of the world as we know it... “We are going to be annihilated by the freaking moon crashing down at us!”“Oh my what a beautiful night blue sky” (As shards of the moon presumably smash into earth) “I guess this is it our extinction event” *I sigh* “Hey look at that a rocket” I say in a normal tone “Their going to live, I guess this isn't our extinction event “Oh well” *We drive towards the tree that we used to play when we were kids* “Heh this brings back so many memories” *As the last leaf falls towards me and lands on my head* Well this is it hopefully they will carry on the human race” *They say softly while the moon and the shards heat up in the atmosphere* “Goodbye” *They say to each other and hug just before the moon makes contact with the earth and turns ocean into deserts deserts into glass* As the last humans left are humanity's last chance...
Thursday, April 30, 2020
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Ooh Jeremy. You have struck a spooky chord with this piece of writing at such a really strange,time in our own existence. I particularly like your rather poetic sentence '...just before the moon makes contact with the earth and turns ocean into deserts, deserts into glass.'
ReplyDeleteI'm interested in your use of ** - seemingly as full stops?
Thanks for sharing,
Jackie (Team 100WC)
New Plymouth
NZ