Monday, June 8, 2020

100WC - Week #37 - Kenneth. The Ancient Jungle.


It has been 2 months since I had seen the lights of New York city. I have been lost in this ancient jungle. I have searched for the gold voila, but have had no luck in succeeding.
       
                                                    Day 2
I have been starting to feel hungry lately, so I went out of my cave and searched for food. It was a bald move because a giant spider had tried eating me.
                                                            Day 3

I am really trying harder than ever to find at least a crumb to eat. I don’t know how much more I can take, I might die.
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 11, 2020 at 3:59 PM

    hey ken i really was really frightened when you sed a spider tryd to eat you
    from Ella

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  2. StMolaga5June 17, 2020 at 3:16 AM

    Hi Ken,
    Well done on your story this week! I wonder how you ended up lost in the jungle. It sounds like things are not going well, especially with those spiders!
    Keep up the great writing.
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c
    Dublin, Ireland

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