Once I was waking up with a gold lost sticker.
It was not mine so I put it into a bowl on the kitchen table and
searched more than ever in town. And it became an ancient
accident and all of my money fell out of my pockit so I played the
viola to get some money to buy a note and it has to say whos
sticker it is and put it all around the town. Bbbpppppppbb
bbbbbbbbbbppppppppp!!! What was that irely in the
morning I said looking out of the window. Hello I said “ hello oh
no help aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
It was not mine so I put it into a bowl on the kitchen table and
searched more than ever in town. And it became an ancient
accident and all of my money fell out of my pockit so I played the
viola to get some money to buy a note and it has to say whos
sticker it is and put it all around the town. Bbbpppppppbb
bbbbbbbbbbppppppppp!!! What was that irely in the
morning I said looking out of the window. Hello I said “ hello oh
no help aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
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