After I saw the thing, that’s when I knew I should
run.
run.
I was hiding behind a big oak tree watching the
thing, it was green (at first I thought it was a tree
but clearly I was wrong) and hairy.
thing, it was green (at first I thought it was a tree
but clearly I was wrong) and hairy.
“What is that?” I muttered under my breath.
“Where is it?” said the thing.
“O-M-G it can talk!” I said.
“Huh? Did someone say something?” said the thing.
“Eeeekkkk!” I screech.
“Talk to me!” said the thing turning around and
heading this way.
heading this way.
I tried to walk backwards but stumbled over.
“Madison? Is that you?” said the green thing.
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