Once I worked at a speech zoo and a light gray elephant started speech zoo. I could tell that he was a good reader so i said hi who are you what is your name “ Hello my name is henry and i was wondering if i could be a student here i am a good reader and i love doing speeches “ well I said yes you can. So your speech is mouses. That day of the speeches. ...then the Elephant delivered his speech... hello henry said with his speech in his hands i am going to tell you about mouses...
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