Tuesday, June 16, 2020

100WC - Week #38 - Joe

Today I went to the zoo and looked at all the animals. But then I saw an elephant. It looked like a smart one! Then it breaks the FENCE DOWN!? It got so scary. Omg what heck did that elephant just do?! It looks like a bull ramming over a cowboy! Uh oh the elephant is coming straight for me! I have to get out of here! AHH Um ahh Ooh Over here at the zepra paddock Wait this is bad there running at me too! I have get up now! Right there HA made it! what?! Then the elephant delivered his speech to him. Omg it's my speech!
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 17, 2020 at 3:48 PM

    that is great joe from charlie

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  2. AnonymousJune 21, 2020 at 5:52 PM

    Hi Joe,
    Your story is full of life and excitement.
    Maybe you could consider keeping it all in the one tense, so we can follow it easier - past or present.
    Keep writing!
    Mrs Abena

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