I was sitting in the living room playing the ancient gold viola until suddenly I heard a noise... well at least I thought I heard a noise.“Whoooooooo,” said the thing.All of a sudden my viola disappeared out of my hand.“Mum!! ” I yelled, “My viola just disappeared! ” Minutes later we had searched and searched the whole entire house but we could not find it.“It is most definitely lost.” I said.“We’ll find it eventually,” Mum said trying to reassure me.Just then I heard a noise.“Whoooooooo,”“Ahhhhhhh! ” I yelled at the very top of my lungs.
Monday, June 8, 2020
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