Today is my bday ya. so happy like what am I going to get. My 12th and next year am 13th yes a teen next year the best. Ya time to open my gift want am I going to get. First one a viola and it gold. I love it. For your next one you look for it. ya . I searched everywhere. It must be lost somewhere. Maybe outside I go look. No it's not there I've looked where it is. Up stairs maybe. No be careful for going down the stairs and I fell down all the stairs. My sister push me and says it was an ancient fall like no it was not it hurt.
Tuesday, June 9, 2020
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ReplyDeleteWow, imagine getting a gold viola for your birthday! I not sure what an 'ancient fall' is, but it doesn't sound like something you would want to happen on your birthday. Oh dear.
I wonder what your next gift was and if you ever found it?
Michelle, Team 100wc,
Melbourne, Australia