Days and days go by and still no sign of hope.
“IT’S NOT FAIR!!!” Yelled Anna.
“WE’VE BE WAITING FOR HOURS, AND NO ONE HAS COME YET!”
“Anna don’t be like that…” Whispered Mum. “Nan will be here soon…”
But she never came, just like that they would be stuck here forever.
And then I saw it…
“ANNA!! MUM!! LOOK!!!” I Shouted “IT’S AN UFO!!!!”
“CASEY back away slowly..” Mum said, trying not to sound worried.
I backed away when a beam of light shot out the top…
Someone Opened the door slowly, ‘Want a cup of tea?’ Asked Nan.
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