Sunday, June 28, 2020

100WC - Week #40 - Aiden

I was on a walk like a normal person but as soon as I touched the footpath the ground started to shake but as soon as I took my foot off the footpath the shaking stopped. So as I put my foot back down nothing happened it might have been an after shake? But nobody knew. But  minutes later a giant spider came out of the ground eight red glowing eyes were staring at me. But I didn't see it. But then an army of baby spiders came rushing out of the ground and then I saw it circling me Ah ...
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  1. AnonymousJune 30, 2020 at 2:42 PM

    My goal this week is...
    Use full stops correctly. - focus, splitting up long sentences with full stops or commas.

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I really liked the way you . . .
I enjoyed reading this because . . .
It was especially good when you . . . because . . .

I think you need to . . . because . . .
Next time you write . . .
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To improve your . . . try . . .
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