Breaking news. There is a gorilla chasing a old lady down yellow street.police ten 7 are on it so no need to panic .This was a story from when i was a little girl But now its coming ture. I'm running as fast as I can. Wait I'm going to crash in to a brick wall.I'm running so fast I can't stop. This is It I'm going to die.chip chip .what was that.Its a killer bird monster.His face is as yellow as the sun.It looks like he has come to save me he picks me up and is taking me away.The gorilla is try to fly.This so funny.
Issy m
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