One day as I walked out to my car, out of nowhere a gorilla broke out of the basement chasing me and making me run. As I ran for my life around my property I tripped on the broken bricks that were yellow. I grabbed my phone and rang the zoo to tell them that I found there gorilla. As I kept running I found a deep hole that the gorilla will not fit in so I jumped into the hole then the zookeepers came and took the gorilla back to the zoo and I was safe at last.
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