Sunday, November 4, 2018
Notch #8
I was doing my hourly walk in the woods, soon i approch a door, it looks like a normal door but it wasn´t a normal door it was a colourful door that change colours like Jeb the sheep in minecraft. Then I wondered what was behind the door. I was getting nervous getting close to it soon i opened it up and there it was a jeb world and there were so many jebs and there were other animals upside down walking and there named dinner bone from minecraft again so the i said to my self why are there so many animals.
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