Thursday, November 15, 2018

100WC Week #10 - Rebecca



Once upon a time there was a gorilla that loved smashing through the bricks and giving his old owner the fright of her life. His owner was dressed in a pretty yellow dress while getting her lovely big green christmas tree ready. Running full speed bang the gorilla pushed through the bricks and gave Gretta a fright. “Augh you got to stop doing that to me one day you could give me a heart attack then who will feed you.”

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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousNovember 27, 2018 at 11:53 AM

    Rebecca,
    Gorillas attempting to commit such horrific crimes are not often shown to the public, and this is a good way to introduce a subject to others, especially one as shocking as this. Also, a sequel where ‘’’’’Gretta’’’’’’’ dies will be automatically requested. Australia.
    A Support ‘er!
    Gavin

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