It's cold in here I say.Ya, what's in here Jacob said.I don't know but, I know there is goods, in the back I whispered.
As we set off, we see a gap in the wall.I think it's in here. Jacob said loudly.Jacob stuck his hand through the wall, and found something.Its a spade, then through the gap,Give it.A man pulled.give it he yelled.`I'm trying to hold on he; he shouted.
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