Monday, March 9, 2020
100WC-Week #24-Ayden
As I walked to the sky tower along the sidewalk . I walked into the sky tower in Auckland, the ground collapsed below my feet ,my friend quickly grabbed me but my hands were slippery ¨ I 'm trying to hold on¨ he shouted . I had fallen down and broke my leg and it was stuck under a heap of rock and concrete everybody called 111 . The police came and the ambulance came as well. I was lifted out and put in the ambulance . The police investigated how this had broken the hole looked it looked like a mineshaft underneath the sky tower but there was a bomb inside so they evacuated.
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