Thursday, March 12, 2020
100WC - week #24 - Carla
We are walking into rainbows end and what ride should we go on first? “ maybe the roller coaster“ yes that is a good choice. Ok lets go. This is a very big rollercoaster “ yes” ok lets go. Ahhhhhhhhhhhh! “Im trying to hold on” he shouted! Just try I said trying to hold on too ” ok ”. One minute later ok that was fun wasn't it “ totally it was now what ride shell we go on now maybe the log one ok lets go aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I am never going again “ ok “ oh now I dropped my phone somewhere go and find it no.
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Hi Carla,
ReplyDeleteWell done on your story this week. Don't forget it's a good idea to read over your story before your publish to check for capital letters and other punctuation.
The roller coaster certainly sounds like a great ride.
Ms Brennock
Team 100 w/c
Dublin,
Ireland