Me and my friend were walking down the street. when i heard a blood carling scream
I looked down a hole. and it was Carlie. He said help so I helped. Then I coed riche him so my friend found a rope so he could gabe it but the rope was too small. We tried a gene. So my friend a harpoon gun but i said no tise to dangers ok said my friend but i found a grapple gun i shoot it next to him gabe in and i wall poul u up thanks but now it’s time to eat your brains
I looked down a hole. and it was Carlie. He said help so I helped. Then I coed riche him so my friend found a rope so he could gabe it but the rope was too small. We tried a gene. So my friend a harpoon gun but i said no tise to dangers ok said my friend but i found a grapple gun i shoot it next to him gabe in and i wall poul u up thanks but now it’s time to eat your brains
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