Friday, March 27, 2020

100WC - Week #26 - Kenneth

They were positioned very specifically, almost like they were preparing for an occasion. I looked at every single one of them. Each had their own symbolic sign. It looked like Egyptian writing but we couldn’t tell. I walked up to the one in front. Then I was consumed by this huge portal, I saw the statues turning into humans. I saw a cannonball fall on a soldier. I take a breath, and realise. I WAS IN WAR! I heard a soldier yell, “GET DOWN!” 
I realise I went back in time.

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