One day Banana came to life and was so evil he was black as obsidian. He was planning a heist to steal all the valuables from the museum. So they planned to climb up the side of the museum and to get the glass damaged and jump down though the broken glass crack, steal valuables and escape with stealth .
He went to do his mission he climbed the side of the place crack he jumped down he sets of the alarms rushing around he take the bones of dinosaurs , the gems ,MONEY he smashes the window BANG but the police are already there "WOW a mutated banana get him" he shouted.
He went to do his mission he climbed the side of the place crack he jumped down he sets of the alarms rushing around he take the bones of dinosaurs , the gems ,MONEY he smashes the window BANG but the police are already there "WOW a mutated banana get him" he shouted.
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