“It is almost time for me to take the photo just wait a few more minutes” I said to my friend.
“Okay, but are my hands lined up properly to the moon” my friend said making sure the photo would be perfect.
“Your hands are perfectly lined up, stay still, 1, 2, 3,” I said.
‘Click’ went my phone I had taken the photo it was perfect.
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