Oh no It the guy off
dragon ball z he making the moon!
Everybody run!!!!!!!! Get the spaceship gooooo wait what is it we don't
have a space ship what!! Why don't we because we dumped it in the sea why
did you dumped it in the sea for!!!!! Because I don't know why we just did it
for fun. Were done for whyyyyy me maybe *spaceship goes off* wait don't leave
me!!!!. Great am all alone here oh no the worlds going to blow up!!!!!!
Noooooooo why me this is it I knew this would happen *world blows up*
ahhhhhhhhhh.
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