Tuesday, July 30, 2019

100WC - July 19 (5) - Genevieve



It was the dead of night and John and Mary were outside having a nice conversation.  It was their 5th year together and John wanted to propose so he constantly dropped hints to Mary that he wanted to get married to her and it just seemed to go right over her head. John thought Mary deserved the world so he didn’t get a ring he thought he should kneel next to the moon and pretend it was his ring in a way. so he sat there waiting for the perfect moment.  When this moment came, he proposed and now they live together happily.
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