“Me and you together forever,” Rose
and Nathen sing together, under all the pressure of one camera and a world
famous film director, Nathen stumbles on his words. “No, no, no!” Matthew
screached, tiny flecks of spit came in contact with Nathens.” face. sorry, Matt
I didnt…..”
“Don't call me Matt, my name is
Matthew.” he said loudly, Nathen could see people from the back mimicking his
words. “Now we've got that sorted let's get back to filming!” yelled
Matthew as Nathen rolled his eyes when he wasn't looking. 3, 2, 1, and action.
as they sang away, all Nathen could think about was leaving this place.
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