I've always wanted to take a picture of me and the moon but I can't because I don't have a camera to take a picture, and there's a snake outside and I don't have a phone either so I'll have to wait until my grandchildren come by. One day later. ̈ ̈Hey its my grandchildren" ̈ ̈hi grandpa ̈ said jake ̈hey kiddo how's it been? ̈ ̈ ̈good ̈ ̈hey can you call the animal patrol plasee ̈ ̈yea ok ̈ ̈thank you can you also take a pitcher of me holding the moon¨ ¨ok grandpa i'll do it right now ̈ ̈oh thank you so so much¨.
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