Once upon a time there was a very wise man who dreamed of holding the moon and that day has finally come. He had all the tools to do it, he told me to meet me in the parking lot on 37 Elm street so I saw him and he was already starting. Then wahh bamm he launched and in about a thanos snap he was back with the moon but it was very small.
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