It was a dark and stormy night it was dark and silent
We went to a volcano and went swimming there were some monkeys that were making very weird noise and they had some bananas it was really funny . It felt like a spa because it was so hot and nice I think someone has done a little accident because it turned purple and it started getting hairy ahhh I hear someone screaming . I decided to get out and run because it was way too scary to watch I ran as fast as I could sprinting like a lion but I don't think I should of done that because there was a lion chasing me .
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