Yay it was the first day of school, we had to pack our lunches in the morning so I decided to have a banana in it. YES!!!!!! It was swimming today. We jumped in the car I was so excited and my sister was just as much. We arrived there and there was this new kid, they had purple hair and was really hairy, I was about to ask them what there name was but they just ran away. School finished and it felt so fast, i was wondering what his name was. Oh no, the teacher told us some news there is gonna be a volcano i was so scared, I felt some soft fingers on my shoulders, I turned as fast as i could it was the purple guy so I asked him, what is your name, he started to speak but we had to run from the volcano. In the end I didn't get to know there name, it is ok tho i can ask later :)
Sunday, July 21, 2019
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Hi Keira, you have written a fast paced 100WC! I also loved you description of the soft fingers on your shoulder. I could easily feel the fingers on my shoulder! Well done.
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Wellington, New Zealand