“The moon the wonderful moon he yelled at his neighbours” “what?” They replied “ The moon is a wonderful thing and someday I want to go up there and eat it” “The moon isn't made of cheese Jeff” “oh” Jeff said sadly “well I am still going there to see for myself” “well you will still need training said the neighbours” “ and it takes 3 hours to put your space suit on” “ well who cares” said Jeff “ I can do whatever I want” then he ran away. Days later the neighbours were watching the news and there was an interesting story about a rocket-ship being stolen and crashed therefore blowing up an entire neighbourhood.
Tuesday, July 30, 2019
100WC- July 19 (5)- Riley
“The moon the wonderful moon he yelled at his neighbours” “what?” They replied “ The moon is a wonderful thing and someday I want to go up there and eat it” “The moon isn't made of cheese Jeff” “oh” Jeff said sadly “well I am still going there to see for myself” “well you will still need training said the neighbours” “ and it takes 3 hours to put your space suit on” “ well who cares” said Jeff “ I can do whatever I want” then he ran away. Days later the neighbours were watching the news and there was an interesting story about a rocket-ship being stolen and crashed therefore blowing up an entire neighbourhood.
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this is cool because this is funny i really want to eat the moon.
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