I was on my way to school walking my dog to his doggy daycare. As I was walking a van pulled up next to me. He rolled the window down to talk to me as I was 1 kilometer away from doggy daycare. He said ¨ Come hop in my car so I can bring you to school ¨. I ran! Halfway to doggy daycare then stopped then kept on walking. He drove forward and stopped to ask me again. Then I dropped my dog off and said goodbye then kept on running to get to school. A few minutes later he came to my school with a knife looking for me. I ran and hid but i'm wearing a jacket. I didn’t remember putting it on ...
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