I ran to the river, the beast close behind. I did the only thing I could, jump. As my body hit the cold water, I saw the beast turn around, the harsh water swallowed me.
I saw ripples in the water, I wasn’t alone. I struggled to swim, whatever it was, it was fast. I hit my head on a rock, I slowly closed my eyes.
I woke up in a bed, I pulled off the covers, and turned on the light. I was wearing something unfamiliar. It felt itchy, I didn’t remember putting it on…. At that moment I knew where I was….
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