It was a freezing day and I had to walk home in the cold. I pulled my bag off my shoulders and opened it up to get out my jumper, but I couldn't find it. I wrapped my arms around myself only to find that my arms were encased in a woolly jumper. What? I thought. I didn’t remember putting it on and definitely didn’t have it on before! I was so puzzled but continued my journey to school anyway. When I arrived at school it had gotten quite hot, so I decided to take off my jumper, but it wasn’t there...
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