I woke up, when mum was calling me. She told me to sit down and listen.
“Last night you were drawing in your sleep. It started with a beautiful drawing but then you got out your felts and you started scribbling all over your body. So we put your painting cloth on”.
I said to my mum I didn’t remember putting it on. I took off my painting cloth and went to the bathroom, then I saw pen marks all over me so I went into the shower. My brother come in and said “mum made pancakes come and get them”.
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