I see strong light my mum and dad are fighting at first I thort it was a dream but then I heard my mum say”
“he is in a coma we can’t brack up now”
“what was I hearing? I wake up from my light sleep mum says.”
“You're wife would like to see you”
“what I have a wife I say confused”
“yes look at your ring”
“I don’t remember putting it on what”
“Can you get married in a coma I don’t even remember having girlfriend how much money do I have.I didn’t even bye a ring???”
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