Part 2
Running into the guards room i shuffled around until i found the closet Phase 1 was going good until...
“HEY STOP THAT BOY”
I froze...
This was it i was done for, but then hope flared up inside my body I glanced behind me and briskly sprinted out the door and through the hallway then i noticed the guard suit...
I didn't remember putting it on...
I decided just to go to phase 3 and run out of the castle but that was a failure i got caught and they sentenced me for 8 years in the dungeons... Part 3
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