Thursday, September 5, 2019

100 wc sep 19 Ruby


AVOCADO gooey green mush smashed on toast with Vegemite yum 

PURPLE  boots  maybe a shirt  all different types lavender, violet,  magenta, wine, plum

BONES in our body’s some get broken some stay strong 

ELEPHANT big grey creatures with big trunks squirt out water 

SEAHORSES  cute little animals bouncing up and down in the deep sea swimming with their tails linked together they are the assassins of the sea



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  1. AnonymousSeptember 5, 2019 at 2:04 PM

    Wow Ruby I love this I like how you made it into a poem By Biankha

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