As the sun rose, the two men stood there in silence, not one mind knew how they got there, but every mind was curious. Not a movement was ever seen again from those two solid people. How did they get there you might think, but no one knows…… People assumed that they were just a statue. But I know it was much worse, someone or something had done this, and it was up to me to discover the truth , I had to find the truth behind the two rock men.
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