Tuesday, September 3, 2019

100WC - Sep 19 (10) - Natasha Dalton

"Dear Diary

Hi, My Name is Avocado and I am a purple Elephant.
Today I will tell you about Seahorses.
Did you Know that Seahorses have special plates on the outside of their bodies, and this covers a spine made of bone.
Cool fact Right.
Did you know that there are 40 known species of seahorses.
That is cool but what if there is more that would be even cooler.

From Avocado"

“wait,  why am I telling a book About Seahorses.” I say to myself
“I am not even a Purple Elephant Named Avocado” I say to myself again
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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 5, 2019 at 2:06 PM

    cool Natasha I love how you made it into a diary it is very good and interesting By Biankha

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