Deja vu
My mind was frozen and blank. Then everything stopped and ... I thought I had done this before. I was getting kind of worried and apprehensive it was kind of unquestionble but it went away. Then it suddenly a sharp pain came roaring through my head it was horrendously bad . My friend Ruby snapped me out of it and said what are you doing I said I think I had deja vu ….. We both screamed and ran away from each other because it was a contagious disease I started remembering that it was all just a dream but then I thought that I already had done this …….
Sunday, September 15, 2019
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