“Avocado...” the teacher said.
“Bones… Purple… Elephant… Seahorses” It was silent “that is the end of the tes…
Bang! Bang! Bang! The lock-down bell rang and all the kids in the class moved
towards the walls but before they could a figure smashed the glass and ran in
everyone screamed but they seemed to be hiding. Although they had a gun someone
seemed to be chasing them. Who could it be? Then another person walked in and
then bullets flying they both started firing at each other but strangely the
bullets didn't even touch them they just ricocheted of the air it was very
confusing then the first person to walk in fell over and died and the other
person was gone……..
To be continued...
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