Gradually, things started to move... 7 hours earlier. “Hey ken wanna come over to my house?”
“Sure i’ll be there in five.”
When i was at home waiting for ken I saw something out of the corner of my eye. It looked like a doll but then i looked over and saw nothing. “I must be hallucinating” I thought to myself. Two minutes later ken showed up.
“Hey ken” I said “hey” he replied. He came over and sat on the couch
“Ahhh i’ve always loved this couch” he said i saw his eyes shine red... “ken?”
“Yeah?” he said in a demonic voice...
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