Just a Normal Day.
It was just a normal day for me. I was biking home from School and then a car randomly appeared in front of me. Its presence startled me so much that I turned and crashed right into a hay bale.
All of my fruit fell out of my bag: the newsletters, the lucky bookclub, the notices I was supposed to give to my mum and dad. Everything flew out of my bag and now I was stuck headfirst in a hay bale. When i got home i had a shower and went to bed. “Good Night”...
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