“Ive been behind bars for to long” I say. I see a guard walking towards me stutteringly “What was that?” Guard replies “I said I've been behind bars for to long” I say “ I’ll be right back” guard says. The guard comes back with a chair and sits down. “Well guess what” Guard Whispers. “I will let you go only you tell me how you got into prison okay?” Guard says “Mmm… Okay…” I start to speak up “Im in Jail for…. Drugs…..” I Lie “Oh i thought it would be worse” He replies “Sooo…. Are you letting… go.?” I answer “Yes…. Uhh i guess” He mumbles. 1 Hour Passes….. “I'm free!” I yell “They never should of said yes!”
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