I woke up to a room filled with pitch darkness. My head started to ache as I tried to move, eventually I gave in and laid my head on the comfy pillow. While I laid there, I had so many thoughts, but as I dug deeper into my memories. I remembered what had happened before I was here. I..I was at a council meeting, and they said we should welcome aliens to our world. They should have never said yes. I glance outside the window. I WAS IN SPACE! Then I look at earth. Aliens were attacking planet earth.
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