Once I was on my bike going down a hill with a pumpkin in my hand. Then I lost control with my body then there was a huge bale that just came out of nowhere it was just still until. Ahhh it is coming after me then. Hello hello i said while I was stuck in a bale. Inside of the bale was warm because it was closed up. I was yelling. And yelling but no one could hear me. Then i remembered i had a knife in my pocket. Then I tried to cut the bale it didn't cut.
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