Today i was fighting lunar moon and he came down to the earth atmosphere and he fort and fort in tile he was losing so he brought the moon down to the ground and gradually, things started to move up and up and up into space the homes stay on the ground and we had a gigantic fight then i knocked him to the ground then he got back up and knocked me to the ground i got knocked out then i thought he will finish me off but when i looked up he went away for same resin sorry for all the damchin
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