Mum! im going to go drop some apples and pumpkins off at nannas house ! okay Hayden be safe! ´´she yelled back”. I ran out the door and jumped on my bike and put my crate on my bike with pumpkins and apples. I started biking down my street and then all of a sudden this thing came falling over my head.
It fell on the ground, is that a hay bail?! I was to concentrated on what it was i ended up biking straight into it and head firsts into the hay bail. Help!!!! I'm stuck, help me !! mum help !!
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