“Come back Roofus!” I yelled. “Come back to Papa!” I turned the corner where he had gone, but when I turned I saw… nothing. All these questions had entered my mind, “Where’d he gone?” and “What happened?” But then, I spun around and saw him jump on me. His licks were calming, and I regained my balance after a minute. This was a park we went to all the time. This time when we went there, this statue had just appeared. Along with multiple all surrounding me inside a big circle, gradually, things started to move. The statues… they’re moving!
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