The last plant on earth right in front of me they never should have said yes… my stupid parents agreed to let me cut the last tree on earth. Why tho? Why did they agree a crowd was slowly forming, my heart pounding going faster and faster as time went on. I'm trying to escape and get out of this place soon enough I feel like fainting… my head spinning in pain. Then you hear it chomp. My heart is going faster than ever. As it goes again chomp. Then a crack chomp crash! I fall to the ground while everyone's cheering… help I say when as I'm falling then light what have I done.
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