I was walking round the house one day thinking to myself I have all this spare time and I’m not doing anything useful with it. Then I thought well I could practise guitar. So I went off to find my guitar and then … what do I have here. My brother is messing around with my guitar again. Which reminds me the last time I used it, it was completely out of tune. I go and grab it off my brother and say leave this guitar alone because one day It will end up broken and you’ll be in a lot of trouble .
Thursday, February 14, 2019
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hi ruby
ReplyDeletethat was a good story that dose really sound like your brother next time make sure to check your spelling like practice
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thanks for the info I'll take more notice next time from ruby
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